Self Evaluation
The weakest area of my essay was AO1 for the reason that I did not incorporate a sufficient amount language levels and terminology into my essay. In order to rectify this I will try to give more examples in future essays. This way I can analyse these examples linguistically and progress up the mark scheme as a result. I also failed to guide the reader through my essay. I will try to plan future essays in order to prevent this failure.
The stronger side to my essay was AO2. I did provide knowledge of theorists and gave my opinions on the conclusions they drew from their research, however, I feel that I still could have incorporated more examples into my essay. I was also able to include my own research into the essay which the examiner appreciated.
